The green master planIt is more than a background idea. Mahidol university promotes green environment at Salaya campus
Salaya campus is comfortable to see. Firstly, it can tell immediately that Mahidol university is a leader of learning experince.
The university wants to keep energy amd environment. Mahidol university want to affect to the quality of life to its students, teachers and community.
I think that it is good to people and environment.Every evening,student can ride a bicycle to get fresh air.It 's good for their health.This is interesting.Then it can show that Mahidol realize about the World Environment Day.To addition, it can create the atmosphere that encourages the learning and this requires participation from students.
Credit:http://www.bangkokpost.com/feature/environment/39359/the-green-master-plan
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